How to use better grammar. So today I'm going to critique some "creepypastas" and shit. If I make a mistake don't be scared to tell me, I'm just trying to help people. Also note that the text is in italics if it is the persons original copy.
FACT: This was part of my dream.
First of all no one cares this is a dream, just saying. Also no need for FACT:
Hampton was inside my dream when i was bored on roblox, anyways I thought it was real.
This sentence was confusing overall. How could you be dreaming if you're on roblox, or are you dreaming while thinking you were on roblox? You should be more specific on what is going on. Also lowercase i should be I.
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